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Excellent work! I really appreciate the warm colors, and the fog that goes well with the soil being damp enough to take that crisp a pa...

by ~silamir

As a piece of art, this is beautiful and well-drawn. And strong colors can really enhance a face. But--just as my personal opinion, y...

by *Anne-Wipf

This is a great pic, and the different elements are beautifully unified. My one critique: See how the darker underside of the bridge a...

by *Dulliros

This is pretty good overall, and the chainmail and furs are spectacularly well done, but I see three points that could be improved: Th...

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~NonieR
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I was never much of an artist even before I developed hand tremors (I'm hypothyroid and 54), but I've always loved art, especially comic-book art and Art Nouveau.

As a gamer of the old school - people around a table with dice and character sheets - I've always loved creating pictures of the characters and villains.

But even before the tremors, I had trouble with poses and proportions, so I'd usually xerox from my favorite comics artists and work from there. One figure's head, another's upper torso, a third's right hand, a fourth's lower body, all customized for age and race and gender and given new clothes and weapons.

And yes, they've always been for private use only. No publishing, no selling, no posting online.

These days, with the hand tremors, it's even harder, so I may occasionally ask DevArt artists here if I may borrow a copy of their posted work for the same purpose.

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When I'm not here, I'm probably hanging out at Ten Ton Studios ([link]), especially the weekly sketch challenges. To my surprise, even some pro artist find my occasional crits useful.

Art preferences: I enjoy some anime, but am old enough I didn't grow up on it, and therefore still prefer a more standard comics style rather than manga or goofy or fully painted. 'S not a value judgement, just personal taste.

Some favorite artists:

Ed Benes
Frank Miller - ever since early Daredevil
Jim Lee
Steve Dillon (even if everybody looks alike)
Tony Daniel
Robert Atkins (though I'm not otherwise a GI Joe fan)
Mukesh Singh (Gamekeeper, yum!)
Terry Dodson
Silvestri, often
John Byrne for conveying HUGENESS in bases, monsters, etc.
Greg Land's got his moments, but he's just too slick
And I've enjoyed the less ridiculous bits of Liefeld, so there.

So yes, I'm predictable; I like fairly pleasant-looking art rather than blobby, too-cute, badly rendered, or grimy enough that I wanna wash my eyes. Yes, those are all great art too - for someone else to enjoy.

I do enjoy erotic art now and then, but not the ridiculously overbuilt nor the deliberately humiliating. No three-foot dicks or basketball-sized breasts, no deliberately grotesque or insulting stereotypes, and (I know this is an odd one) no explicit rape or torture that isn't in based on both characters' personalities AND their relationship.

Yes, Wesker might do something pretty nasty to Jill, and they both know it. Gives me the creeps, but it's valid to me in a way that, say, having Lobo rape Jubilee or Donald Duck or Aunt May isn't. Ditto for, say, Bane taking out his old prison habits on any of the Bats, but not the Scarlet Witch, Archie, or anyone at all from the Little Mermaid. (No, not even Lumiere.)

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And in any kinda art, I REALLY love a good parody--not the generic caricatures of classic Mad magazine, but ones that really match the style of the original.

Which is one reason I'm so fond of the Ten Ton Sketch Challenges; among all the serious versions of a character, you can suddenly run into Khoi Pham's Big Barda in bunny slippers finding out that her armor shrank in the laundry. And if you're a little tired of the Watchmen, Jeremy Freeman drew them as Muppets. And how about mmmmmpig's Taskmaster perfectly mimicking the skills of...Fred Astaire? GWAH!

--Nonie, having the time of her life

Current Residence: Iowa City, USA
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Favourite genre of music: Sea chanteys, Celtic and traditional folk
Favourite style of art: Comics, preferably modern
Operating System: The human mind <g>
Favourite cartoon character: Porky Pine from Pogo, or Samurai Cat
Personal Quote: "This sentence no brain"
Interests
Gwah! I think I bruised my funny bone tonight. (No, not that one; I'm female.) ;)

One of my gamers likes to hold movie nights if we have to cancel our weekly RPG session, and one member turned out never to have seen "Big Trouble in Little China," so the rest of us got to enjoy it all over again.

But Lee didn't *warn* us before he followed it with the video "Lo Pan Style," [link] , which was apparently done by the same actor who played him in the movie. Bwah!


Still, I'm planning my revenge; Lee probably knows "Enter the Dragon" by heart, but even though he's *heard* of the parody "A Fistful of Yen" (the main section of "Kentucky Fried Movie"), he's never actually seen it.  Picture me cracking my knuckles with evil glee.

(An old friend of mine down in Texas said "Fistful" nearly got him killed, because he'd seen it BEFORE the original and therefore seriously offended a whole theatre-full of violent young Bruce Lee fans when he couldn't keep from laughing himself sick during a screening of the real thing in San Antonio's Aztec Theatre. The theatre used to be (and perhaps still is) one of the major test sites for cheap-ass martial arts and boxing movies, because all the macho young Tex-Mex guys would get drunk and go there to watch people beat each other up on screen. They especially loved what used to be called "chopsocky" films--a term that's probably considered racist now, but referred not to Asian movies in general but to the cheap martial arts flicks put out by cut-rate Hong Kong studios before the era of international talents like John Woo. Aaron said one of the funniest things was that, before the era of voice actors, the American releases were dubbed by whatever English speakers the director could find in a Hong Kong bar and hire for a few hours --most often sailors on leave--so your noble young swordsman might be voiced by an old Australian deck-hand, and his princely brother by a drunk Alabama boy in the US Navy.)

--Nonie

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:icondecemberflower111:
Thank you for the favourite and lovely comments^^. I really appreciate it).
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~f4f May 10, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks for The Watch. I am glad you like my work.
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:iconnonier:
Me too! ;)

--Nonie
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~freerangepenguin May 9, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you for the :+fav:! :)
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:iconnonier:
Well earned!
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Mood: Humor ~Valkaneer Apr 24, 2013  Professional Writer
It's just, if you aren't an artist, looking at a billion pictures can't make you an expert. You wouldn't tell Picasso; "the nose is a bit too crooked", would ya? :)

I can see an artist taking critiques from another proven artist, but some artists get really offended when novices or non-talents try to tell them whats-ah-what, you dig?

Not being mean, just post more favorably in the future and "ask" if you might make a "suggestion" before just going right into what you think is screwy about the piece. ;P

Most people will be more than happy to hear what you opinion is on what we must realize is their hard work and time if you come at them in a proper way.

Ease into it, don't blurt!

:)
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~emu-strutsi May 2, 2013  Student General Artist
I'm sorry for dropping in to this conversation but when it comes to this statement: "if you aren't an artist, looking at billion pictures can't make you an expert" I think very differently - Viewing a billion artworks usually means that the person is interested about art and has gathered some deeper knowledge about the subject too.

I'm not a very good writer but I recognize good writing when I see it. I have no musical skills but I know when I hear a good song with great lyrics or a catching rhythm. I'm still learning when it comes to photography, but I can tell what I like about someone elses photos and what doesn't work. I have no idea how to make movies, but I do recognize good plot lines, well written characters and beautiful cinematography. Have the editors writing movie critiques for magazines ever made a movie themselves, I doubt that, but still they're critiques are appreciated (Well you can argue about their accuracy sometimes :D)

When you are an artist, you have to learn to receive critique. Not all critique is good but it doesn't mean you can't learn from it and in the end it's up to the artist whether they do anything with the critique they get. Personally, as a growing artist-someday-to-be, I appreciate every single piece of critique I get, because it means my work has somehow affected the person so much that he/she has decided to tell they're thoughs to me and bothered to write them down. Critique on the flaws is most valuable to me because that's where I learn most from.
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~Valkaneer May 2, 2013  Professional Writer
Yeah, but when the person hasn't requested in depth critiques and some untalented twit pops on the give a comment about something they themselves have perceived totally inaccurately, and doesn't even ask if its alright to do so in the first place, some artists tend to get pissed off. ;P
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~emu-strutsi May 3, 2013  Student General Artist
Oh but I guess it's not your or my job to call anyone untalented either :D As I said, I think every critique is good to hear and you have to learn to take it because not everyone is going to give you praise for everything you do. If you don't think it's justified you don't have to do anything about it but thank the one giving feedback for their opinion. I think the purpose of websites like this is to give and receive feedback to help you improve your art and if you don't want to do that you can turn off the comment option in your profile as earlier mentioned, but accepting only the superficial positive comments is kinda childish and won't take the artist any further with their works. What I'm trying to say is that if someone bothers to write a critique it usually means they just want to _help_ the artist and no artist should get pissed off about that :dygel:
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Oops--Forgot to say, do remember to disallow comments from me, Valkaneer, since you don't want 'em. I'm not being snarky about this; I have ADD and forget people's names even if I've known 'em for years.

--Nonie
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